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| tawnyfawn 2003-09-21 ch 1,   | I really like this. One of my friends told me about you and now I love your stuff. Plz. keep up the super wonderful work cause its so good. |
| --Hem-- 2003-09-06 ch 1, | This is a cleverly written poem...super! |
| Mouse 2003-09-06 ch 1, | oh, I'm impressed. I can see how it can be political, but, I'm just going look at it as a poem (since I'm not that big on politics at all). and purely as a poem, it's outstanding. good job. |
| BecomingMyself 2003-09-04 ch 1, | ...Whoa, that is scary...seems like hell to me! Another so dark and somewhat angsty, to feel society is portrayed the way you did...But yeah, sometimes it might be lived like this and generalized to emphisize the wrongs we are doing to our own world...or others who are doing the wrongs! I hope spirits who do live on, will linger positively... "But spirits don't die...forever"; Great line to end the works more powerful... Depressing, but good again! It is good, so write on! Till next time! |