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| bookwormish 2004-08-27 ch 1,  | abuseWow. That was... it was amazing... the repetition and wow... *bows to your greatness* ~kitish |
| Tenika D 2003-10-13 ch 1, | abuseAgain, I'm speechless. Good thing my fingers work, ne? I'd be sad if I couldn't review any of this. Again, a wonderfull piece; I like the final stanza in particular. Might I quote? "Always before the sun would shine. Always before the moon would reign. Always before the stars would guide. Always before...but never again." Simply wonderful. Tenika Dargan |
| find-nowhere 2003-09-12 ch 1, | abuseWow, Jareth. Just wow. |
| teh tarik 2003-09-04 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery of this poem was great. The last stanza was beautifully written and very sad too. |