Wow. That was... it was amazing... the repetition and wow... *bows to your greatness*
~kitish

Again, I'm speechless. Good thing my fingers work, ne? I'd be sad if I couldn't review any of this. Again, a wonderfull piece; I like the final stanza in particular. Might I quote?

"Always before the sun would shine.
Always before the moon would reign.
Always before the stars would guide.
Always before...but never again."

Simply wonderful.

Tenika Dargan

Wow, Jareth. Just wow.

The imagery of this poem was great. The last stanza was beautifully written and very sad too.