Free verse is indeed most evil to write... you did good though *claps*
~kitish

*speechless*
What a perfect metaphor, and beautifully written.

Interesting . . . I like it. I understand, though - I hate writing free verse, too. If it's written even the tiniest bit off, it seems to scream for rhyming, and thus throws off the whole piece. However, I think you accomplished your goal just fine. Don't worry. ;)

And yes . . . damn the muse.

Tenika Dargan

Gorgeous!

I like -some- free verse, then some...I don't. Yours was good. I have difficultly writting free verse...and poetry in general. o_O
Methinks I try too hard because I can't bear to not be good at something.