grr...my train of thought was just bombed halfway through this by my dad asking me if I got my paper dolls finished (french assignment). *sigh* I'll prolly hafta go read this over again :P s'good though *_* I really like your style of writing :D keep up the good work! *_*

Niph

Hey, this was really good. I was singing it like Linkin Park. You know, sorta rap metal...kinda... I loved it though. Excellent job!

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

That was awesome! Such powerful words were used, and the rhyming was incredible. You're good at this stuff. Great job.