Very kewl!

This is a very interesting and fun story. I like how you used the first person point of view; it draws the reader into the story and gives a sense of connection. This sounds like a fun setting for more stories; I hope there will be more adventures with Lene and Daaney.

hey awsome story, but i dont get whats up with the old woman. anyway i was wondering how old lene and daaney? oh and can they fight any? well anyway love the story so far cant wait to read more