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| philoslove 2004-10-15 ch 1,  | abuseThe second line is just *brain struck down by beauty". WOWOWOWOW! Lovely, it really captured the emotion of an artist, who sketches instead... |
| featherlight 2004-05-28 ch 1, | abuseI take this to mean that art is the way of communicating for people who don't have the words to express how they feel--a "sketch of life," silently drawing what they see and feel. Beautiful. |
| Dracula, Lord of the Vampir... 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. It's one of those poems that make people think about it. Thanks for the review. |
| Shadow 3013 2004-03-18 ch 1, | abuseThe poem as a whole is just decent, but that middle line is just *wonderful*. Also... I'm glad to see someone besides me spells it 'coloured' instead of 'colored.' I use both, randomly, truth be told... But still! |
| Non-existent Puritanism 2004-02-12 ch 1, | abuseIt sounds like an introverts only way of expression...very nice Haiku... |
| MR.SEAN 2004-01-25 ch 1, | abuseThat is deep, its almost scary! |
| Infinite Smiles 2004-01-23 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely put |
| Premeditated Chaos 2004-01-15 ch 1, | abuseOOh, lovely. I've always wished I could draw, so when the words won't come I can just sketch what I'm thinking. Very pretty haiku, you have an obvious talent. (Thanks for the review...although I think you misread my ending comment, which was referring to the final haiku, not just the last line. Doesn't matter. Again, thanks for taking the time to review ^_^) ~PMC |
| Melancholy Butterfly 2003-12-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is really great, and I do agree with drawing/sketching to express unspoken emotions. I really like your use of the words "mute soul" because it's really striking to me. Well done! |
| mizu no kokoro 2003-09-30 ch 1, | abuseDrawing is cool, i prefer writing to express what i want to say. then again, don't we all? :P |
| RaeneofFaeries 2003-09-20 ch 1, | abusereally nice, I could totally relate |
| handle187 2003-09-16 ch 1, | abuseOne time I saw a woman who was beautiful beyond words. I wanted so much to write a poem about it but I couldn't, all I could do was sketch her from my memory. I can relate very much to what you're saying. |
| mmoonsshiner 2003-09-16 ch 1, | abusedont really care for haiku but this is pretty good... ~Nat The Unchanging Darkness~ |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2003-09-11 ch 1, | abuseVery true, sometimes drawing them out are better then conversing. |
| Keep it 100 2003-09-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat description. ~Heart of the Sword |