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| Wrider 2008-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseAh! So pretty; I loved it. It made me think of my own story, because it's about a palomino horse. Great imagery :-) |
| philoslove 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseAlive! Magnificent horse, I can see. Although, I thought "wind flowing through mane" was a bit simple? But capures the palomino's speed and magnificence fine though. thanks for the review! that's one of my best haikus. i actually found you on friendster a few months ago. your email @ from here. i love your writing. |
| Cloud Burst 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abusebeautiful! |
| Dracula, Lord of the Vampir... 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseInteresting and mysterious. Why is it mysterious, you ask? Because you should tell people who or what Palomino is. Other than that, good job. . |
| Willow Elandria 2004-03-31 ch 1, | abuseaww i love horses. *grins* |
| Shandris 2004-02-26 ch 1, | abuseT.T WAAH! This reminds me of my horse (who was a palamino). She died recently at the ripe old age of 31! (That's really old for a horse!) It captures the essence of her memory so perfectly! Your so great at Haikus! ~Sakura163~ |
| Lina Inverse 2004-02-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat description! |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-12-30 ch 1, | abuseMM, so pretty...reminds me of that horse movie, what was it called...? Spirit I think, just the prettyness of wild horses. I myself have actually never ridden or anything, but I still think they're gorgeous. ~lyv |
| Vlaadimir 2003-11-27 ch 1, | abuseVERY beautiful!! |
| elfianjoy 2003-11-20 ch 1, | abuseOh! I really liked this, especially since my pony is palomino. But lovely imagery here, very vivid. Beautiful. |
| frugale 2003-11-16 ch 1, | abuseVery expressive! Naturally beautiful. |
| Emi Amara 2003-10-31 ch 1, | abusehiya! yet another great poem with endless great reviews!! well done, this is so cool, you can totally see the imagery aswell! thank you for the reviews!! =) theyre greatly appreciated! keep on writing =) cya |
| Goddess' Phoenix 2003-10-27 ch 1, | abuseaw I love that... I want a palomino ^_^ it was an awesome poem. ~em |
| wingless 2003-10-04 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. i can see it perfectly. simple yet sonderful |
| Lidless Eye 2003-09-28 ch 1, | abuseAwesome... just awesome. Great work. |