This is very good; I beg to differ with your prior reviewer. I know "rotting corpses" is a relatively common turn of phrase, but in this context it works perfectly well.
My only suggestion would be to break this up into stanzas. (hate that term) much prefer *verses*.
On a personal level; that is what I would do.
Needless to say excellent poem.
KEEP WRITING!
F.C
I would value your opinion on some of my work. I think you might enjoy:
"Honoured Night"
"The Valiant"
"Primal"
"Fairytale"
"Vision"
"Covet"
Any of these may appeal as these are essentially Fantasy/Sci,Fi pieces; there are others, but anyway, that gives a bit of a cross-section; see what you think. :¬D

I like this, it was a fun read, ut might I make a couple of suggestions?

It's a little hard to read, with the lines being so short. Don't be afraid of making them longer.

There are some great lines, but I think that "rotting corpses" is a too oft used phrase, and might do with a change.

Overall, a nice read.

Mia