you are good. I think this is about someone falling into hell. They had no way to get out the hell is surronding them... That what u think it is

I've always sort of thought that Hell (Do you capitalize Hell or not?) might be like a bottomless pit, and the fire might come after you've hit terminal velocity. I dunno, I'm not going there, so it doesn't matter. :P

creepy but really good. yeah if u r a Christian u see it as hell.

I'm christain and i know what you mean about the different way but i couldn't care less about that. Nice poem kinda dark though but who said that was a bad thing. I had a dream like that. Wouldn't it be so creepy if this did happen? A whole new type of hell. Yea I'm shutting up now.