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| Melancholy Butterfly 2004-06-15 ch 1,   | From my interpretation of this poem, I found it to convey a sense pain and that feeling of being stuck and unable to free oneself yet not wanting to care at the same time. The word choice and repetition of the poem adds a gentle tone to the piece, yet it also adds an element of. . .eeriness? Defeat? Overall, nicely written! |
| MODERNDANCER 2004-05-23 ch 1, | Um, interesting. I don't exactly understand it, but I won't ask. :-X |
| blakependragon 2004-02-08 ch 1, | :opens mouth, closes: ok i won't ask...^_^ it's a good poem later |
| Lidless Eye 2003-09-28 ch 1, | Very nice, short poem. Keep up the greatness! |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-09-20 ch 1, | This has an interested, twisted feel to it...like a slightly mad woman telling her sister (of whom she has always been a bit jealous) this softly, gently, patting her on the back, as she grieves for her husband (who was killed by none else but the aforementioned mad sister)...and all in these soft sepia tones... ... what can I say, maybe I read too much into things. ^^ Anyways. Strange poem, strange interpretation, I suppose... ~lyv |
| handle187 2003-09-16 ch 1, | Nice, I haven't cried in a long time, for all the reasons you've stated. |
| Needa S 2003-09-09 ch 1, | Wow... I like this...Outstanding piece! Keep writing... |
| Gods-Child 2003-09-09 ch 1, | Awesome.. Come join this site write at both places its free tell a friend. And keep on writing. PoetsshortStoryTales@groups.msn.com |
| soulspring 2003-09-06 ch 1, | it's a very interesting thought; it might be good to move on but sometimes you just need to let it out first. excellent piece! |
| Keep it 100 2003-09-05 ch 1, | Wow. Really moving. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Mime 2003-09-05 ch 1, | "...sometimes our vision clears only after our eyes have been washed with tears..." *wink* |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2003-09-05 ch 1, | I'm not going to ask you anything but only to comment on your piece of great artwork. Perhaps a word will do - brilliant! |
| obsidian katana 2003-09-05 ch 1, | wonderful poem! short, but sweet, and well written, meaningful. i like it. good job! |
| Jimmy Jazz 2003-09-05 ch 1, | Fantastic! I love it, amazing! |
| Deadwind 2003-09-04 ch 1, | Ug, I love this one! Simplicity is beauty...and so is depressing stories...Another cool job! |