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Reviews For: Cries of the Light Giver

damienriceisgenius
2007-03-17
ch 1,
you serioudly need to try and get that into a published collection of poems...beacause that was simply beautiful.
can not really say anything than:in my favorites.

Sing to me of my demise
Of intermittent fall and rise
Of how the dawn will come and burn
And how for You I'll surely yearn.

perfection in a sentence...
Lami
2005-09-23
ch 1,
wow Doc, that was amazing! really pretty. it's going on my faves list. really there is nothing you could have done to improve this even though i really want to seem clever and you know.. critisize constructivley. but, it's perfect:)and i'm not just saying that because i have a general facination with the subject matter.:PMs. Shelly :)
AethraZip
2003-09-09
ch 1,
That was.. just beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Just.. wow.
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