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| damienriceisgenius 2007-03-17 ch 1, | you serioudly need to try and get that into a published collection of poems...beacause that was simply beautiful. can not really say anything than:in my favorites. Sing to me of my demise Of intermittent fall and rise Of how the dawn will come and burn And how for You I'll surely yearn. perfection in a sentence... |
| Lami 2005-09-23 ch 1, | wow Doc, that was amazing! really pretty. it's going on my faves list. really there is nothing you could have done to improve this even though i really want to seem clever and you know.. critisize constructivley. but, it's perfect:)and i'm not just saying that because i have a general facination with the subject matter.:PMs. Shelly :) |
| AethraZip 2003-09-09 ch 1, | That was.. just beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Just.. wow. |