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| Niki Tori 2006-10-27 ch 6,   | !!THIS CHAPPIE WAS SO CUTE!! ^_^ Yuki is so adorable!! Awesome...SUNLIT CRANE ROCKS!! UnTil neXT TimE LovE You Niki!! |
| Niki Tori 2006-10-27 ch 5, | Wow! This was good...Keisune's and Yukiko's relationship is so CUTE. Mother and daughter like. This chappie was so GOOD!! This has to be one of my favorite stories...it is!! THIS STORY ROCKS!! UnTil NeXt timE Love YOu NikI Tori |
| Niki Tori 2006-10-26 ch 4, | Wow!! Yukiko ROCKS! She whooped that guys bootay!! YEAH YUKIKO!! I really like this story!! Tommorow I'll read more okay! YUKIKO!! Until NeXt TimE LoVe you Niki!! |
| Niki Tori 2006-10-26 ch 3, | ^_^ This chapter was wonderful!! It was really good...I mean REALLY GOOD!! Oh I can't wait read on!! I am going to read on RIGHT NOW!! YEAHHME! UnTil NeXt TimE Love You NikI TorI!! |
| Niki Tori 2006-10-26 ch 2, | COOL CHAPPIE!! THIS WAS VERY NICE!! You are a very good story teller!! I am going on to the next chappie!! This is so addictive!! ^_^ SUNLIT CRANE ROCKS!! Until NeXt TimE LoVe Ya Niki!! |
| Niki Tori 2006-10-20 ch 1, | I just finished reading this...It was really Descriptive! Just from reading the first chappie...I am amazed! Again SO FREAKING AWESOME. I realy liked it everything was set out so nicely!! I'll be keeping up with this!! !AWESOME! Until NeXt Time!! Love You Niki!! |
| Bildungsroman 2006-09-27 ch 13, | ...Amazing. So philosophical, so beautiful. I am in complete adoration of your writing and of your characters. You, Kakyou, have earned my respect. |
| Bildungsroman 2006-09-26 ch 7, | I have only reached chapter seven, so far, as I must go to bed, but I am in awe. Keisune is amazing, almost godly. It is also fascinating to read about how Yuki grows and matures even over the span of only seven chapters. A truly masterful piece of writing. I will continue in the morning, but until then, goodnight. ~ Mindbreaker |
| secret ninja 2006-02-14 ch 12, | this is a master piece, truly and masterfully done, i can't wait until the next chapter. ;) |
| somethingsup 2005-10-10 ch 12, | This is so deep, but then again all your stories are. Lots of description and believeable characters. (sorry if I misspell, lol) |
| Yatori Shizuku 2005-10-06 ch 12, | Sweeping. Keisune is an amazing woman. To find in such a warrior the space and power to convey such an ethereal ideal as her driving force in life shows how ironically beautiful things in opposition are. Stellar. Simply put: stellar. Thankees for the review! Glad you liked it! More, please! |
| poetic abortion 2005-09-22 ch 12, | well this is gorgeous. inspiring and gorgeous. your writing improves each and everytime you write. :) I always feel this need for more and the waiting is a killer upon a person. ~* noelle |
| Panthera ursus 2005-05-17 ch 1, | I like your style of dream. its kind of like mine, but the way you order your thoughts is easily disrupted by errors of spelling and gramar. i find it flows, though, despite any error. your writing is... well, I like it. |
| Yatori Shizuku 2005-04-26 ch 11, | This chapter is elegantly beautiful, very moving in its combination of the various ways people regard war, blood, death and the mere sight of the sea. Hopefully, this trend will continue to the very finish. I am both happily anticipating it and struck by the sadness of the coming end. Ah, well. I was always maudlin. Tbak you for this romp. |
| Yatori Shizuku 2005-04-26 ch 10, | Thank you for the huggies. I appreciate them fully, as much as I appreciate your story and how you appreciate reviews. A light, happy chapter... but I have the feeling of impending disaster. Why? Waiting... |