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| Horizon Passage 2007-03-06 ch 11, | The Lady Effie, this story is fabulous. I love the interaction between the snobby princess and the wise prince. It's kind of a Rhett and Scarlett thing--I love it! Not to mention the writing is fabulous. You really have the characters down. Please update soon. PS~ Thanks for reviewing "Days of Rain". I'm so glad you like it. I will be updating again soon. |
| a 2006-12-14 ch 7, | i like your plot but the language that you use for their dialogue is really comfusing. it makes it very hard to read. other than that i really liked it. keep writing! |
| Skeptic-Critic 2006-12-14 ch 11, | Score! Another chapter dedicated to me...I must be on a role...If I had known all I had to do was review again, I would've done it ages ago...I didn't realize how much I'd missed this story until I reread the chapter before and remembered everything that happened and whatnot...This is such a great story... Did we already know he was a prince? I can't really remember...I know I may've suspected it...Eh...Whatever...Just please don't wait as long to update...Pretty please... |
| Skeptic-Critic 2006-12-13 ch 3, | Dudette! I've been watching this like a hawk for almost a year waiting and then I totally miss it...Great...So...Anyway...I was watching so that I'd be able to tell you on the day that you've reached that one year mark...As in, one year since you last updated...Wanted to make sure you knew that some of your readers are still out here waiting for another update...We haven't abandoned you... |
| Skeptic-Critic 2006-01-03 ch 2, | Hey there...Just wanted to start off the new year by letting you know that I haven't forgotten about you and that I'm still waiting for that update. I will not abandon this story 'til you say you're through. Hope you get the inspiration to update soon. 'Til then... |
| BangBangYourDead 2005-12-08 ch 10, | I loved that you updated!! Please update soon! Its an awesome story. Your write great. |
| I forgot... 2005-11-23 ch 2, | She IS shallow! The prince has reason to refuse her company. I love your story, and another one that I love is Forbidden Harmonies! I think, seeing what types of stories you write, you'll like this story! Read it if you can! |
| Skeptic_Critic 2005-11-22 ch 10, | i feel so special...i've never had an entire chapter dedicated to me before...a word here and there, a couple sentences, and entire paragraph if i'm lucky but never a whole CHAPTER...my... anyway...i so saw that coming...the killing him...why pay for silence that might not be kept when you could kill him and guarantee the silence? i mean really you'd think the innkeepers would think these kinds of things through once in awhile...you simply say no one of that description has come in that you noticed...deal without the money...greedy innkeepers never last long in these stories...i'm rambling now...i'll be back to review for your next chapter... |
| BangBangYourDead 2005-11-12 ch 8, | update! |
| Skeptic-Critic 2005-10-07 ch 1, | hello, just wanted to let you know that i am still awaiting an update and that i have NOT forgotten you. hope this will be the inspiration you need to write another chapter... |
| BangBangYourDead 2005-09-11 ch 9, | Please Update this. Its really good. Update Soon. BBYD |
| Skeptic_Critic 2005-08-05 ch 9, | hey! i'm a new reviewer and the title caught my eye. i'm a bit confused as to exactly what's going on, but thats the way with most stories isn't it? anyway, i hope you update soon. |
| SnowPixy 2005-08-05 ch 9, | hey u got a good story going on here..keep it up! |
| Stereominate 2005-08-05 ch 8, | Hi there. I read your story, or as far as you've managed to write - I see you haven't updated for quite a bit. XD In any case, it's well-written, and I enjoyed reading it. You could do with a lot more describtion, though. For instance, we have barely any clueas as to what Ulric looks like (from what i can remember, at least) save for him being 'handsome'. |
| DH L'Orange 2004-08-20 ch 8, | wow... i feel so sorry for Fay! plz update soon! : ) DH |