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| Aslan Israel 2004-03-28 ch 1,   | Perfect. I couldn't have envisioned it better. |
| me10 2003-10-10 ch 1, | that was beautiful! i had to read the title to figure out what exactly the poem was about but its clever and sweet. keep writing! |
| handle187 2003-09-16 ch 1, | They make themselves seen The song bird and the panther Intangible gifts |
| Starlight Maiden 2003-09-07 ch 1, | Wow...you know, I never had a thing for haikus but this one is brilliant. Reminds me of one of my own, (not a haiku, just a suicide for love poem ;p) and i don't like to advertise but I'll tell you just this once anyway it's called Heart Shaped Earrings and somehow, I think you might like it. Arrogant, ain't I? ~starlight |
| Mime 2003-09-05 ch 1, | Hey, don't feel so down, we probably all feel like that at some point in life! (After all, we ARE only human...^.-) Anyways, awesome haiku! |
| simpleplan13 2003-09-05 ch 1, | quite true... sadness... good haiku |
| Lilith Dastalour 2003-09-04 ch 1, | A very nice haiku! |