Quite a creepy observation..
You did potray this very nicely..
Interestin, though I can't say this is one of your best pieces.. Somehow the rhyming here sounds more forced than normal.. The first and last stanza in my opinion sounds just a little off..
But heh, I liked the content of the piece.. EErie and quite easy to catch..
As usual you have a steady rhythm to the piece.. I enjoyed that..
Great poem..

~Shadafakup

Wow! Sounds like Retor from my story, 'The Alpha Warriors and the Soul Crystal' - or even the mistaken image of Morbidus.

Blessed Be,

Andaren x