Beautiful. Expressive. Intense.
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What else can I say?
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My favorite line is: "financial fort" (love the alliteration!).
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In its entirety, the poem flowed incredibly well.
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Good job!

Great job. Your rhyming in your poems are very nicely done.

(Please Read + Review my work if you have the time to)

I just wanted to read your other work because your last poem was great. and I totally agree with you about the earth. I am afraid to ever have children when I get older because of what this place will come to in the next 50 years. Mass destruction and who knows.

You sure have an uncanny way of expressin yourself as well as the truth in an intense way..
Great theme of the piece, an an even better way in which you explored it..
Interestin to say the least, it was rather creepy, choice of words an all that..
Good rhyming scheme, the poem flowed and it spoke for itself, clearly..
Wonderful job..

~Shadafakup

:) Really liked this poem... You have written it very well; great rhyming scheme. I love the subject matter... We will distroy ourselves if we keep on with this way of life, not that anyone seems to care...
Great poem :D

Ah yes. So very well put.