I like it. I can definitely relate to this feeling of waiting for ever for something that will mostlikely never come.

good job and keep up the good work

My God. This was so incredibly sad and so incredibly GOOD. You have such a way with in touch review wise.

Some times I wonder if this was inspired from the same love who torments my soul LOL ...I really enjoy your work :)

i know well the pain of unrequited love, more receantly i thought i had found my one true love for the rest of my life an she loved me for a time, but her feelings have changed an though she still cares deeply for me it is no longer in that way. Ah well, i love the tired aching pain this poem expresses so well.

I don't care much for romance, but this was written well. Good job. Keep writing.

what a wonderful poem...and thanks for reviewing mine! i can really relate to this...especially right now. im having serious guy trouble, grr. anyway, i love the poem! keep it up!

Im in that kind of situation. Think I'm gonna give up to.

I used to be in a similar situation. It gave up. Good poem.

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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King