I hope you realize Maeven I went from 11:00 o'clock to 3 A.M. Last night reading chapters 1-20. I've spent six hours now finishing the rest. And after staring bleary eyed at my laptop until it died, not having the patience to charge it I switched to my phone to read and now I HAVE to say...well done. The best story on Fictionpress there is. Period.

Well it's good to know how that story went :) another great story! Even if its apparently the very rough draft, I still loved it!

Oh Will. I actually had fallen in love with youuuuuuuuuu. and Caine toooooo..

I thought Tristan had a chance. and I liked Will more than Him.
OH WILL .. love youuuuuuuuuuuu. take me . hahahaha. kidding
Will's gonna be a best buddie if he's real, dont yah think ?
hehe

uh, this kinda remind me of Hana Kimi.
BTW, the story's great !

I love love love this story. It is a perfect balance of romance, humour, suspense, and it's just wow! I love Will. He is so funny and just so funny! You are a really good writer. I read this in one go, just couldn't put it down! Keep up the excellent work! ;D

This story is so funny and really good! I hope you keep it up on this site.

Oh Gosh! I love Vincent! He reminds me of Zuko (another hot guy) from ATLA :)

Really interesting start! I can't wait to read more of it!

OMG! Best story ever! You should totally write more. Loved it! :)

Really, really amazing. No wonder why your story is so popular.

I'm happy at how Sam became more courageous.

I loved this story! I can't believe how good you are at writing and how attached I got to the characters you wrote. You described them so well... and when it ended I was crying cuz I was thinking, 'WHY DO SUCH GOOD STORIES HAVE TO END?!'

I loved the - actually I loved everything! ;D

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. It's hard to believe you were thirteen when you wrote this - because it's much, much, much better than most stories here on Fictionpress. I love love love love love how you began the story with a bunch of rowdy boys and ended it with them teaming up to save Sam. There were a few grammatical mistakes in here, but the plot was so captivating that they were easily ignored. Good job!
-Inky

Oh my god. xD I can't stop LAUGHING. LOL. The end of the chapter is just so HILARIOUS! xD

I love this story so much!