This was a FANTASTIC story. One of the few true gems on this site, which I'm sure you're well aware of. The fact that this is your early work is a testament to how awesome a writer you are. I hope you pursue a career in novel writing. I think you would be a smash hit!

Thanks for posting this story again. I actually write my fiction as well, but I never posted or made accounts online because I was terribly afraid of plagiarism in my teen years (I read a novel where a professor killed his students and stole their screenplays to pass off as his own). I'm sorry that it happened to you.

Best of luck on all your endeavors!

oh my gosh! i love this book! ADORE IT! sequel?

Thank you. I read this story when it was first posted, and I was impressed with the realistic characters, your excellent portrayal of the batty uncle, etc... Anyway, thanks for reposting.

I LOVED IT! I really do hope you finish revising the story. If you get it published into a book you should let us know, I'd definitely buy a copy.

Nichloe

eww...that uncle is nasty=|
apart from that very cute chapter =)

hahaha
awesome chapter
will sounds like a cool dude

no way..
this is your rough draft?
dayumm!
youre offically one of my favourite authors x]
though, if this is just a draft you should post your updated version on a plagerism-protected site

Ugh, I want to read the expanded version so badly! Stupid plagiarizers. But I hope you get it published when you're done revising it, and let us know when you're done revising too!

Nichloe

RePost?!?!?!
Yes!
Why has I not known this sooner??
I'll reread the whole thing tomorrow, when I (hopefully) no longer have a headache.
Thanks SO much; you just made my WEEK!

absolutely amazing! i loved this story so much. the greatest fictionpress story i have read so far. keep on rockin' Maeven!

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O_o I love this already! Vincent, the name, reminded me of Pandora Hearts(manga) and kinda scared me. Good thing they don't act alike. o_O

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oh my good ness.

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oops

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loved this chap.