|Reviews for False Facades|
| fuzzinuzzi421 10/19/03 . chapter 9
Agh HE'S A SHE! A SHE! Just let someone find out already- like a sister or something! I'm going insane!
good chappie, glad to see it on the site, and the car trip was hilarious. There were a few grammatical errors, but lo que sea, they didn't ruin it or anything.
Rember: You write- I read!
| TakenDeath 10/19/03 . chapter 1
Hehe, thanks...um, would you mind reviewing my story? If not, that's cool...I'm just reviewless right now...*stares into space*
| Srahah 10/19/03 . chapter 9
OMG! I love this so much...i totally cracked up...update faster, please...I CANT WAIT! Great Job!
| fin 10/19/03 . chapter 9
man, i love this story. i was so happy to see that you updated. Please update again, soon! i love this story so much, its quite amusing.
| saz 10/19/03 . chapter 9
o this is so good cant wait for more
| Ngsiyrnlcy 10/19/03 . chapter 9
i dun like tristan (sorry to all the tristan fans) but i jus want sammy to be with vincent so bad.. lol.. they're so cute.. i was lovin the whole bed scene.. i thought that was adorable... please make him find out.. soon! lol.. thanks a bunch fer writing this! haha.. err.. yea.. lol.. keep up the great work and update soon!
| Midnight Owl 10/19/03 . chapter 9
awesome chapter! i love long chapters! lol...tristan and vince are NEIGHBORS? wow. that's cool...lots of fun stuff. i cant wait to see what happens on this vacation! anyways i hope you update super soon!
| NeWriter 10/19/03 . chapter 9
Great chapter! The thing about italics should come by themselves if you use HTML. The same with bold... I liked this very much but I think you are confusing the "He asked" with the "She asked". i think you should decide if Sam is going to pass with a "he" when she thinks and speaks or not... and another thing: "William yawned lazily. "We here already? Jeez, this place haven't changed at all, have it?"
It should be HASN'T not haven't :D. Very funny though! Could you please mention to me how old the character's are since Vince can drive?:O Thanks! Keep up the good work :D
| Tragedy is Love 10/19/03 . chapter 9
please, please, please, please update soon! i really, really want you to! i like the character will because he's funny, especially because of jack! lol, that's so _. please update!
| Kickaz too lazy 10/19/03 . chapter 9
Haha! Too funny... Continue! So good!
| Jacaranda 10/19/03 . chapter 9
I hope somebody finds out soon, because they're all going to begin to hit on her like mad - not that Will doesn't already.
| fearphobic 10/19/03 . chapter 9
aw, that scene when Sam wakes up in Vincent's arms was really cute, lol. itz kool Tristan is Vincent's neighbor, though i still don't get y they hate each other so much...
| sapphiredreamz 10/19/03 . chapter 9
oh... great fic! update soon!
| Rebecca 10/19/03 . chapter 9
e! I'm loving this story more than ever! I love the fact that this chapter was so long. Why? More reading to do! Usually when the chapters in stories are really long I get frsuatrated and skip sentences and paragraphs just so I can get on with it. But when I read this I savor every word. I really wish you could add a chapter more than once a week. But then I suppose I wouldn't have anything so great to look forward to on the weekends!
Again, if you ever right a book, I'll be one of the first to get it off the shelf!
| Christine 10/19/03 . chapter 9
hey... great chapter...very long too...
i would love to know more about Vincent and Tristan's history together... like... why they hate each other's guts...
Also... i've got this one question that's been nagging me ever since i started reading this story...
when i read a story... i automatically imagine it actually happening in real life...
And, no matter how i think about it... i can't figure how Sam, being a girl... can hide the fact that she has her period every month... (Blushes...)
Okay... you probably think i'm a total weirdo for asking that... after all ... it's a story... for gods sake... everything doesn't have to fit...
Anyway... great story... i;m so glad Tristan's is also going to be there...
the fight's between Vincent and Tristan are the most entertaining...
P.S. i assume the author of this story is a girl... (please correct me if I'm wrong...)