Heh Heh...didn't know there was another poem! U_U;
That was a long one! It was very good! Very good descriptive words you used! You are a great writer!
If you like werewolves the book you need to read is one you can probably get at the library, It's called "The Blooding" By Patricia Windsor. Great book about a teenage girl who goes to England as an au pair (Some one who works around the house) for a family whose mother is sick. The husband, Chris, is a werewolf and changes the au pair into a werewolf after the mother dies. Of course when I say werewolf I mean they change into real wolves, shapeshifters. An AWESOME BOOK! HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!! From me! Best book I have ever read. I couldn't put it down even to tell my grandmother bye when I walked out the door!! (Poor nanna!) U_U;
Ne-ways, check out the book if you can! Well loved your poem!
~^Andrea^~

Hi liquid Gold!
I just read your poem! Wow!
See I'm trying to find published poems about wolves for my poetry book at school and I sorta got turned around and ended up here!! And it's wierd because I write fanfics on Fanfiction.net! Oh! I read your summary for your first story, the girl and the moon, or sumthing like that...and I want to read it! But unfortunately I'm in a hurry, but I will come back to read it for sure! So I'll put you on my Favorites list!
Oh! I LOVE WOLVES! Hee hee!!
So like I said, I'll be back and I will review all your chapters! Because who doesn't LOVE Reviews?!?!?
Well, later!
~^andrea^~

o rally like the second poem. Makes you feel like you are there and got caught doing something naughty. LOL :)

A little confusing, but a decent poem.

-Seras

Simple and short. You kept it that way but still transmited the power of the werewolf.

I'll be checking the rest of your work. Keep the writing.

~Testsu~

Very good descriptions! Very nice poem also, I like werewolves :) I like the poem also, heh.

Keep writing.