This is pretty good, it's short but sweet i like it. :)

WOW!That makes a really um-well a really vivid picture in my mind...as if its really happening!geesh! is this one a one-shot story too? thanx for reviewing my story..I hope to have the next chapter up soon.

DUN DUN DUN, (*does quick first comment dance*) the vampire strikes again. *background music plays* once again very realistic. and when most people thought it was just a hangover, BUT no they had really been drinkin from the night before @_o... ok i shut-up now. *glomps* you write more!