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| Dying Without Gackt 2005-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseYeah. I always did wonder, when you look as something - what's beyond what the eye can see. This created excellent imagery! |
| poetic abortion 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseNo no no. You don't have to say you're sorry. -.-; You make me feel awful if you do. --err guilty is a better word. ;__; You are not at fault. I too had exams. V.V; Beautiful as always. Breath taking and just gorgeous. Very simple but I like it that way. Just flowed better. ^0^ XD Great tanka. Well done !! ~* Noelle *~ |
| Catty Engles 2004-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat explains it. I've seen the same thing at dawn, sitting on a cold, deserted beach at Florida. You should do a sequel about a sunrise. That's my favorite thing to write poems about. This was very short but very descriptive, I liked it a lot. -Cat |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-09-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome...good tanka are few and far between, it seems, so I'm always happy to find one. I love love love the second line. ~lyv |
| Miz E. Mak 2003-09-15 ch 1, | abuseAn incredible tanka. I cannot express my love for the idea of seeing that scene. The whole thing is so descriptive, yet so simplistic...Very nice job. Write on! |
| LimelightOfDawn 2003-09-12 ch 1, | abuseHey sweetie! Thanks so much for your reviews. I really appreciate your opinion and kind words. You seem real nice :P I liked this tanka. Looking out over the sea muct have been so wonderful and peaceful. I know what you mean about falling though! I wouldn't like to fall in either... lol Anyhoo, if you have MSN messenger, feel free to add me, i'd like to talk with you. najawillow@hotmail.com :) Blessed be! Mark xx |
| cosmo-queen 2003-09-11 ch 1, | abuseAn excellent choice of words. You created some powerful imagery. Keep up the great work :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Needa S 2003-09-09 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful as always! Awesome job!! |
| Gods-Child 2003-09-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome! Come join this site its free write both places. Tell a friend! Keep on writing... PoetsshortStoryTales@groups.msn.com |
| LancerDragoon 2003-09-08 ch 1, | abuse...Wonderful tanka! |
| CoolBeans18s 2003-09-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! This is beautiful! The imagery in this is amazing. You can practically see it... the sky, the ocean, fused together in the inky blacknes... ~ CoolBeans18s |
| Jimmy Jazz 2003-09-06 ch 1, | abuseFantastic!! This is amazing! I love the concept, the story behind it is great, and the haiku was awesome! Fantastic! |
| soulspring 2003-09-05 ch 1, | abusethe scene is captured so brilliantly in your words... a fantastic piece! |
| Keep it 100 2003-09-05 ch 1, | abuseSuch an great image. I can picture that so well. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Mime 2003-09-05 ch 1, | abuseWow...that must have been really scarey, being right in the middle of the water and just staring into nothing but the darkness like that. Awesome poem! |