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Lina Inverse 1/19/04 . chapter 1
O_O Amazing alliteration! (...heh... and I did the vowel version of alliteration- I forget the name of it- in saying so...)
neeo 9/6/03 . chapter 1
sounds like it's about a mosquitor bite