Cool...Really good chap.. buh bye

i like this chapter.. but.. i'm confused to what all the stuff about Ronokiro is about.. you need to go a lil more in depth with Raven's mentality on that. otherwise gj!!

O_O more! i love the romance in it!! and thanx so much for the review!! much appreciated. but this.. o... fun!! :D

please conintue SOON! why is Ronokiro being so mean? what's the big deal about her raven turning into a dragon? what does it mean? she has black hair, right?

aw, i feel so bad for her. i mean, she doesn't have a clue how powerful she is and none of the goddesses want to believe that she is that powerful. well, it doesn't seem so anyways. please continue

i really liked the longer chapter 1. poor Reyven. i feel so bad for her. now, i assume that the "other" inside her is the Raven of the Elements? anyways, i liked this chapter. Ronokiro is sweet, and i like how Raven shot that power out of her hands. please continue.

so, i'm just a tad confused. Who's the one speaking at the beginning? that first sentence i mean. I understand that the "I" where it says "yes I could..." is Reyven speaking, but is that her saying "I await the day..." as well? and if so, who's she walking away from? (that's watching her) and who's He? i wanna know mroe.