...and no one can hear her scream. I'm surprised this poem has as few reviews as it does. It's very deep, very powerful, and very impressive. That lack of self-worth, of self-importance, it conveys a feeling I can relate to (and probably still do). To wander life alone like that is so sad, so painful, and it becomes the norm, so we accept it, believe it's what we deserve, and we don't cry out for help until we really need it, but by then it's too late for any help to come. The irony is that we've really needed it for so long, and when "she falls" is when the problem can no longer be dealt with. In just those few lines, you've captured an essence that few people can describe, and that most people cannot understand. It's curious how you did this so well. Tell me, have you ever felt this way?

-Yusef "The B.A.T." Pittman

Beautiful and a nice story to go along with it. 7 out of 10.

That was desctibed really well.

This poem was intresting, that it was. Very much, indeed.

I enjoyed it.

The descriptions were wonderfully said! Keep writing!

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Maybe if chance comes you could check out some of my poems?

I am to be re- adding a chapter story soon. Too, it's a fantasy.

Unseen to Us.

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Wonderful poem!