 Tenika D 2003-10-13 . chapter 1Very good . . . I like this quite a lot. I wish I could think of something else to say; it feels like I'm just spouting the same compliment over and over again . . . O.o I will say, however, that I like the material in this one; the idea of one race throwing the world into chaos because of defiance is excellent, and the way you wrote it out made it even better. Cheers!
Tenika Dargan |