I've been a fan of your writing since the days of the Quest Assistant, and I must say that this piece, in humor, character, and plot, is the epitome of perfection. I also enjoy your writing style immensely - I can't put my finger on it, but you have a certain something that is the mark of a writer with talent.
I really can't find much wrong with this, except for maybe a couple of typos. I hope you update soon - I'm anxious to read it.

Yay! All hail the queen of funny fantasy stories! I love it! The only thing I'd say is that when Deran was down in the whole, he seemed a little too melodramatic. Other than that, though, 'tis loverly.

Ye gods, that catapult jester's gonna get annoying...

Great story! I love it; can't wait to read more! Thumbs up to you!

I liked it and enjoyed all four chapters. Keep up the good work. Oh, and great job on the pictures.

Phoenix

Loved the chapter, especially the Ladle of Death wielding Cook. Keep it coming!

That chapter didn't end like I expected it to.
The last paragraph was sort of " *blink* Okay."
But it was good! (yes, I know, I'm very helpful *heavy sarcasm here*)

I liked it, in other words. But then, I like most everything you write. =)

~May the West wind guide your wings~