you have a wonderful set of gifts, and this poem proves it. You have a first-class imagination, an eloquent pen, and a beatiful, caring heart. Keep writing.

I like this alot! you did a great job! keep writing ^.~

Dear Jessie, WOW! You are a lot of different things. (he he):) Keep working. Never give up.

I am an avid enjoyer of good poems.
;P

I like it. My two favourite lines are:

"I pretend to hold a holy sword and smite evil demons with it."
and
"I feel a unicorn's breath warming my face."

Most lines invoke such strong imagery that this poem becomes an experience.

It's very touching. :)

It would be my dream too, to live in such a world. And I too, am looking for that magic. :)

L'Arcange