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| the insane floo pot 2004-02-28 ch 1,   | Hee I love this po.. song, song I meant song lol! I love how you can take something as normal and simple as an x-ray and use it to make it twist into this really sinster and dark thing... "You'll know all my secrets right away You will see through all my disguises" See *shudders* but it's bloody fantastic! The whole image of the x-ray and how it's woven throughout the song is amazing! |
| Kostami 2003-09-12 ch 1, | nice poem(song i mean) :) it was really easy to think of it with music. |
| Lacrease 2003-09-08 ch 1, | I love this. This is beautiful. Wow. I love how you used the metaphor here. Very beautiful described. Wow. |
| MR.SEAN 2003-09-06 ch 1, | Dude! Funky Chicken Thats Very Cool! |
| Lady B.V Rose 2003-09-06 ch 1, | Wow...I heard a tune to this n everything. blingin'! - BVR |
| whisperedXkiss 2003-09-06 ch 1, | wow, its good...are you writing something for every letter of the alphabet? |