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spellbinding 2004-01-15 ch 1,	Wow, how sad, and how very well written. Definitely reminds me of something an elf in LOTR might have been thinking. Keep up the great work... and thanks so much for reviewing my poem! :)
Katterree Fengari 2003-10-17 ch 1,	hmm...yes, that's true...you say it's said by an elf? could be any immortal-like person...eh
not sure yet 2003-09-23 ch 1,	very interesting, like it a lot, love some of the imagery in this one, esp the part of looking over the bloodied field, could really see that in my head, good flow too, fairly well written and with carefully planned out stanzas, muchly enjoyed, nicely done
SweetGrape 2003-09-14 ch 1,	Aw:( Well written- the rhythm and rhymes are pretty consistent. Sturdy telling of how things used to be- how they should be. 'I remember a time'- half nostalgic and wistful, half regretful that things have changed. 3rd stanza is very strong with great imagery- nice contrasts show how times have changed things- even the sun and moon. 'daily terror'- strong phrase- suggests the horror of the situation. And for the last stanza, it's almost a summary of the rest. Ages ago, I was happy here, and now...
Anjeni Windsinger 2003-09-07 ch 1,	Oh, wow... Amazing work, I really like it. I love the stanza about the changes in the meanings of sun and moon. Great poem!