This is very good as well. Simple yet complex at the same time. With all your poetry (especially your religious ones), you act more as a painter, painting these celestial images for your audience. That's a tricky thing to do these days.

nice poem. The first stanza is my favorite...it is so graceful, but the last stanza is the complete opposite. It is quite a thrill to have that kind of switch! And you did a very good job of it. write on!

wow love the words great poem