WOHO!! I love your books, they are just so wonderful!! Great job, this one was the thirs book I read of yours and its just what I like, fantasy and romance! Plus it was totally clean, WHICH I LOVE!!

LOVE the story :D
and Daelan finally got together with her.
how about Ronan though?
will he have his own seperate story? :D

aww :(
so she was taken into the sea?

love the story.
and Daelan is so sweet :)

so maybe her father and mother are in the water?
or maybe because they died there tahts why theyre there.

YAY.

Laralaine and Daelan for the win :D

I think the whole Laralaine having Daelan's baby would be a good idea. I imagine there'll be a lot of editing to do that, but I think it'll be worth it.

Wow! This is an amazing story! It's so unique and original :) I luv it! However, the part where Daelen and Laralaine first met to the time where he took her to Inown seemed rushed. They had only just met and their relationship started kind of too quick. Another thing to consider improving on is grammar. Some sentences don't even make sense. Other than that, it was a beautifully crafted story! :)

Very nice story. Kept me away from my homework for almost 2 hours :) I like your style of writing, especially the descriptions. The time and place you set it in is very interesting, although I would have liked to know a bit more about it. Nice work! -Kel

oh i absolutely LOVE this story. it's brilliant ~ Alenor.

This story is very nice. Good job!

YAY IT'S DONE WHOOT! Wait a tick, is that a good thing? *walks of pondering*

woah I have tears... why am I crying over a story?

*gasps* Oh no!

Since I neglected to point out errors before, I have one now: "Gently rolling waves of a clam sea, the setting sun in the distance and a family of Selkies playing on the surface of the water." I think you meant "calm" rather than "clam".

The story is still amazing, though. And even the best authors make mistakes.

~ Aria