|Reviews for Flight!|
| katyruth 9/6/03 . chapter 1
interesting...i definitely like what it's about, and there is some nice imagery. however, i think you could ommit the work "soar" at the end, i think that just the "blue lines" line would be a better close to the poem. if you get a chance come review me! keep writing!
| Keep it 100 9/6/03 . chapter 1
Beautiful work. I loved the metaphor.
Heart of the Sword