 BlueRose218 2005-05-11 . chapter 1Very beautiful, I've never thought of looking to the individual constellations for inspiration (which may be because Orion is the only constellation that I can ever find anyway) |
 crazy-lady141 2005-01-21 . chapter 1He's looking at me now! |
 Dj SpRiTe 2004-08-09 . chapter 1^_^ Me likey! |
 sleepy-sentry 2004-06-20 . chapter 1Nice haiku! |
 Amora Elvenstar 2004-02-03 . chapter 1Awesome. It really categorizes it where it belongs and shows the different way to see it. Absolutely Beautiful. |
 Prowling Muse 2003-11-07 . chapter 1Thank you for giving me another perspective of the stars.. |
 Vlaadimir 2003-10-26 . chapter 1Really beautiful. I love stars and I love this haiku. Very nice. |
 Starlight Maiden 2003-10-14 . chapter 1Awesome...very nice! |
 godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-09-21 . chapter 1I love your haiku...oh btw, have you noticed that the acronym for your penname is "hots"? For some reason I found that intensely amusing...^^ yes, you're right, I'm odd. Oh well. Great poetry once again!
~lyv |
 OracleVIII 2003-09-21 . chapter 1Imaginative to give a nice picture in one's mind. Nice write. |
 eew 2003-09-20 . chapter 1~ See? Just what I was talking about. Really great words.
c. butterfly~** |
 Summerdazed 2003-09-19 . chapter 1I'm so impressed!! I love looking at the stars but I can't identify which constellation is which! Anyway, I hope you won't mind...but I've put the link to help Priincess Mulan on my profile page as well. Sorry I didn't ask for permission! I hope you won't be mad at me for doing that, if you do just tell me and I'll get it off.
=summerdazed= |
 Miz E. Mak 2003-09-15 . chapter 1I love this...the lines are very cool. I think that the line "silver, steadfast gaze" hit me the hardest. Very nice work. write on! |
 cosmo-queen 2003-09-11 . chapter 1Beautiful haiku. You captured the essence of the Orion constellation with skill. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen* |
 obsidian katana 2003-09-07 . chapter 1wonderful haiku! love the descriptions and imagery and word choice. great job! |