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| BlueRose218 2005-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseVery beautiful, I've never thought of looking to the individual constellations for inspiration (which may be because Orion is the only constellation that I can ever find anyway) |
| crazy-lady141 2005-01-21 ch 1, | abuseHe's looking at me now! |
| Dj SpRiTe 2004-08-09 ch 1, | abuse^_^ Me likey! |
| sleepy-sentry 2004-06-20 ch 1, | abuseNice haiku! |
| Amora Elvenstar 2004-02-03 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. It really categorizes it where it belongs and shows the different way to see it. Absolutely Beautiful. |
| Prowling Muse 2003-11-07 ch 1, | abuseThank you for giving me another perspective of the stars.. |
| Vlaadimir 2003-10-26 ch 1, | abuseReally beautiful. I love stars and I love this haiku. Very nice. |
| Starlight Maiden 2003-10-14 ch 1, | abuseAwesome...very nice! |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-09-21 ch 1, | abuseI love your haiku...oh btw, have you noticed that the acronym for your penname is "hots"? For some reason I found that intensely amusing...^^ yes, you're right, I'm odd. Oh well. Great poetry once again! ~lyv |
| OracleVIII 2003-09-21 ch 1, | abuseImaginative to give a nice picture in one's mind. Nice write. |
| eew 2003-09-20 ch 1, | abuse~ See? Just what I was talking about. Really great words. c. butterfly~** |
| Summerdazed 2003-09-19 ch 1, | abuseI'm so impressed!! I love looking at the stars but I can't identify which constellation is which! Anyway, I hope you won't mind...but I've put the link to help Priincess Mulan on my profile page as well. Sorry I didn't ask for permission! I hope you won't be mad at me for doing that, if you do just tell me and I'll get it off. =summerdazed= |
| Miz E. Mak 2003-09-15 ch 1, | abuseI love this...the lines are very cool. I think that the line "silver, steadfast gaze" hit me the hardest. Very nice work. write on! |
| cosmo-queen 2003-09-11 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful haiku. You captured the essence of the Orion constellation with skill. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| obsidian katana 2003-09-07 ch 1, | abusewonderful haiku! love the descriptions and imagery and word choice. great job! |