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| cementtrampoline 2004-07-27 ch 1, | I really like th elast line "Silently pleading." expresses alot. |
| shinco 2004-02-07 ch 1, | Very cool! I love your imagery! |
| Dirty Wallpaper 2003-11-02 ch 1, | i really liked, especailly the very last line "silently pleading" really jerks at your heart. lovely, kudos |
| Roadside Dryer 2003-10-28 ch 1, | Good poem. I hope to find other works of yours that are better though. Thanks for reviewing me. For some of them you were the first person to ever review them in the maybe four times I put them on, thank you greatly. ^ ^ - he he |
| Soviet 2003-10-12 ch 1, | Not as good as the two poems I reviewed right before this... but still ok... keep it up |
| MiNt-BrEaTh 2003-10-09 ch 1, | wow... I think that I'm feeling sorry for this dude... Yikes! |
| Infinity Plus One 2003-09-21 ch 1, | everything you write is good in the right way |
| glitterjewele 2003-09-08 ch 1, | wow! this scene really came to life for me. the hopefulness of the homeless people was actually distressing. i still kinda feel like i'm engulfed in darkness . . . excellent combination of the haikus. two favorite lines in this one: "deep as the seabed," and "silently pleading." awesome start, awesome finish, outstanding poem all around. nice work. |
| Miz E. Mak 2003-09-07 ch 1, | very interesting sights!! wish I saw that at night. |
| swirlygirl 2003-09-07 ch 1, | oh this one was really pretty... |