First of all, thanks for my review. I really like this poem. I like the line "my fake smile fools everyone" because i can relate to it really well.

*DailyLatte*

It's as if you were writing about my life, from my perspective. My favourite poem. Keep it up, please.

dude thats awsome how much i can relate. you capture emotion extremely well

wow dude...it's kicks ** so emotional...its awesome just like all of your other ones ;)

That just reaches into your spirit. It's awesome, i love it ^_^

R.I.

nice poem ^_^ keep up the good work.. and i can relate to that poem alot.. nice work..

"My fake smile fools everyone"
Those words are so true for many of us it seems. Everyone puts on a facade for the world and no one truly knows what we are thinking or how we feel.

Another fantastic job. I'm adding you to my fav authors...

TS

that was very good. i love it. i can relate.

Excellent! I know the feeling!