More awesome goodness. I am really digging your stuff. It's so plain spoken and strong. I'm not that fond of flowery poetry. Yours is the kind I weed through the rest to read.

It doesn't matter that I've read it before, this makes my eyes prick every time. I don't know how you can... reach inside my head like that. I know you haven't, that this is all from you, but... it feels like you've read my mind. It's not actually from Fight Club - I got the line off a website, though it was originally from the film, I'm sure. Hugely powerful; I can see Dari saying it all. Intense.

Beautiful. This is a truly beautiful poem. Part of the beauty is that I can relate. Thanks :)

Bravo, Bravo! I love it!!...it's very ironic and i can actually relate with it((shows you what type of person I am, lol)) Anyhow, extremely well written and thought out.

~~Scarlett

I love this its very deep. Fight Club rocks. He says stuff very deep like this..this poem belongs in the movie. very wonderful. You are jack's raging poet soul.