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a Leader by Default 2006-10-27 ch 1,	abuseSo good.
Teaqa 2006-08-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseI feel totally inept at writing reviews for pieces like this. I just want you to know that you can write, that you can instill emotion into the simplest phraseology, I enjoy your pacing and your tone, I love this line; "In the rush-hour crush", I wonder at the way you make me think and how you can so aptly reflect my own rush hour wonderings, I admire your ability and I love this poem. Thankyou for it...really, thankyou.
Blue 2006-05-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseI think that that poem was very soul-felt. Truly, it is rare to be able to meet someone who can show so much feeling in such a simple poem. I admire you, even though you may never see nor read this review. I marvel at how you can bring emotion into something as simple as this. Or maybe I'm imagining it. Well, either way, I congratulate you on this piece of poetry. It truly deserves more than I can say to you.
Rainbow Fingers 2005-06-17 ch 1,	abuseI absolutely loved this! It was well written and unique. Thank you for a good read!
boy that you loved 2005-05-09 ch 1,	abuseyou conveyed your encounter with this man incredibly, your people watching game retold. but everyone wonders why they care. i enjoyed this very much. good poem. 'aptmyn, aptmyd, aptmyae, batditwwshfh'
Maroon 2005-04-28 ch 1,	abuseNice last line!
Mystic Rider 2004-12-30 ch 1,	abuseOh hey... Hmm. Thats cool! I likes it. ^_^ I wonder like that (ish.. not as deep or cool, and definantly not long enough to make a poem.. trust) sometimes... anyway. ^_^ I liked it by the way.
loveology 2004-11-26 ch 1,	abuseSheer delight.
Sadira 2004-08-28 ch 1,	abusewow!! i'm so glad i read that. its beautiful. i love the way your thoughts progress, kind of like the train. i feel like i can picture him. its really beautiful. actually, its a bit like a poem by steve turner called "for those whom i will never meet". you should read that. thanks so much for sharing this, its fantastic.
phooey 2004-08-13 ch 1,	abuseFive Stars. =D -S G F
daphnegray78 2004-01-29 ch 1,	abusegreat job! I really like this...it's so cool! I think a lot like that sometimes. ya know...for some odd reason...this poem made me think of the movie Harriet the Spy and when she starts writing in her notebook about random strangers she sees...anyway, awesome poem!
baditterbunnyqueen 2004-01-13 ch 1,	abuseOh my freaking goodness! What a totally awesome poem. That was-- wow-- it totally bowled me over. Wow.
one crimson tie 2003-12-15 ch 1,	abuseHey, I love this! Normally I don't check out poetry (you won't believe how much crap there is out there, or perhaps you can), but this was intriguing. I like it. Maybe because I take the metro every day. Or maybe because it's just GOOD. Especially the last bit: "I woundered whether, in years to come/If I were a famous poet/And you read this poem/You would recognise yourself." Just lovely. Have a spiffing day, and thank you for this poem. I'm printing it out. regards, __ one
aceinit 2003-11-13 ch 1,	abuseI'd forgotten how much I'd missed hearing from you until I read this. I don't know how you do it, how with a few short words, you can evoke such strong emotions and senses of place and time. I had a similar experience a few months ago, on a subway in Manhattan, and the man across from me still has me thinking, asking a lot of the same questions, thinking so many of the same thoughts. It's sometimes amazing what things in life reach out and touch us so profoundly--like the man in the Underground. Your writing will always be one of those things.
Cirien Phoenix 2003-09-07 ch 1,	abuseThat was a really awesome poem. Seriously, that was freakin great! It made me think about all the people I never pay attention to in ordinary life. Wow...That was really cool. Also, thanks for the review. ~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

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