ah fluff...

I'm actually really enjoying it already and these two are so amusing, nice job

I love this story! The end is so sweet and sad.

This was so bittersweet. I loved it!

Wow!...that was great. The ending was so sad though. It made me want to cry. The hardest part about losing a loved one is going home and seeing all of the things that remind you of them and then knowing that they will never be coming back. It is a painful experience and I think you did a wonderous job in describing the feelings one expeiences in a situation like that. Still wish that there was a happy ending though. Sad endings always make me...well, sad. Anyway, wonderful job with this. I was very pleased (not to sound jerky or anything)

What the fuck? DAMN! Why'd it have to be so tragic! *sobs* AH! beautiful but too damn sad!

really sad ending :( but really great story! i really liked it! great work :)

Hm...I seem to get a lot of heart breaking ending these few days...anyway, not bad, *thumbs up* though you could like ah, give a bit more details and emotion...oh you know what I mean, so...bravo!

very good, Wolfie. cant wait to read the rest.

miss you, and thanks for the dedication *hug*

Yay! I love it! *though a bit confused on why everyone likes licking the batter, I mean like...its...raw...* Its kinda weird when the slave seems to act not-like a slave, oh well, it's really good!

Anyway, keep writing I tell ya!'I'm putting this into me favs...