Hm... Interesting. Very interesting. Update soon, ne? It seems like it's gonna be good! ^.^

~~Elph-chan

Darnett WRITE MORE NOW! there i did a review I liked it WRITE MORE! >.

That is so sad.But really beautifly written though.

good story so far, short but sweet. it would be interesting to see this continued. you had nice detail, in what short bit i read, and your dialogue was realistic

~color outside the lines~

ps thank u for your kind review!

I want to read more of it. i like it so far

Cools. I like this ^^. Keep it going!

~~Mera

Good description! I love story that paint a picture in your mind! Keep it up.