ooh, nice. great job! i really like your work so far!

Man, most of your stuff even rhymes. I ain't that great at poetry, but it seems almost effortless for you.

Very dark, i like it. In my bouts of depression i have quiled many works simular. With me it has mostly centred round the brave last stand against some opponent or other. I love the whole sacraficing yourself for others and the last act of defiance thing. i will see if i can type up one of my depression poems for you an you can see what you think! lol

another great poem this was about death but i didnt have all the gory details well done!

beautiful and mystical... lovely! keep it up