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Ebony's Willow
2003-09-08
ch 1,
I can see this is a very heart-felt poem. I have read quite a few poems about self-harm - i didnt realise it was that common. Well expressed. Also, I would like to take this time to say that my poem (that you reviewed)was not supposed to show any real emotion, the whole point of it was to show how a lot of people hide their feelings. If I wrote how I was feeling it would completely the jist of the poem. Although I do have other poems which explain feelings. I am not attacking you here, I just wanted to explain myself.
aquamirage
2003-09-08
ch 1,
i like your works!
Lauren K
2003-09-07
ch 1,
Oh wow, this is really deep. I feel so terrible for how you've felt, and everything you did to try to make that terrible feeling go away. I think that you should really get counseling or something, which I'm sure you've heard before, but seriously. Now you're just "taking control" but think how awful it would be to become taking your life. Please, please tell me if anything improves. Your poem was really good, in a sad, frightening kind of way

~Kiara
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