i understand what you mean, this is good, i cant say what i would cos i guess every1 can read this differently but i liked it a lot.

Phoenix

interesting poem. i think the imagery is pretty well done. i'd try to guess the meaning, but i'd just screw it up terribly, so i won't bother. good poem though

the first part is easy enough to understand, it can mean many things, but it is the last bit that changes the entire feel of the poem around and makes it more personal to you. but a good one, i like it coz it can be as deep as you want to read into it.

M, (have you ever noticed how a nice 'm' comes out as just m?)

I don't really know what you were aiming for with this one; was it meant to be vaguely sexual or is it just my perverted mind? Hmm, don't answer that actually...

Anyway, beautiful imagery. Very nicely written!