very very nice.. have you by chance read david edding's The Belgariad and The Mallorean? Or Polgara the Socceress? Belgarath the Soccerer? The plot sounds rather like that one.. Child of Dark, Dark Lady, Child of Light, Lady of Light.. I'm not accusing you or anything.. just thought i'd mention it.. but its great and i cant wait to read the next chapter..

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I will patiently wait for more to what looks like an great story!