E! Thank you so much for continuing! I"m so happy! I love it! The fluffiness! Ah! They kissed and ya know? Daimon lied! He promised that he wouldn't make a move on Minx and he did! Oh well! ^^ *purrs* I like that. ^.~ Keep up the good work! And please write more yaoi yumminess! e!! Muy Bien! Sugoi! Bravo! ^^ more pwease!

*glare*

You are an evil, evil person you know. ending a chapter like that!

*growl*

*tightens her grip on Millie's leash*

Of course, a cliff hanger is no reason to let Millie have a go at you, not updating on the other hand...

I advise you to update soon, I can't always be keeping ahold of my homicidal maniac friend Millie.

Hey! This is good - I only have one problem. THERE'S NO MORE TO READ! Please, update soon. I'm looking forward to it.

Goodies!! I'm so glad you continued! I"m sosososososo sorry that I didn't r/r this earlier... I suppose I was busy with Dare to Love. ^^; Thank's for reviewing it. Chapter Five's up now. Um... and anyways... about this thingy... Manx should die. I don't like her. Daimon should get together with Minx. *nods, nods* I don't care about the girl peoples. I want my shounen-ai! I wanna see my yaoi! *whines* please...? *gives kitty-cat 'pet me' face and mews* I have turned into a chibi kitty just for this review! Nyana! Please continue...? Nya! *wigles around like kitten* Pwease? :3 are you convinced yet?

Good, but short again ( idon't want the damn thing to end!) Um, was Daimon wearing anything in the stream (See what I mean about descriptions!) either way the scene was really hot! *shivers lightly* Oh, if Minx doesn't understand the language, then why did he say Argane? Minx lives with his parents? Still good, I'm reallty excited about this!

Getting much better, I really like this. Um, what exactly is up with the humans? And what is the relationship between Minx and Maruya (btw love thier names)Getting really good. Please try and descble them a bit more though so I can get Di Gi Charat out of my head. Tell about the shapes of thier eyes/faces, clothing, accersies (yea I can't spell but like glasses, collars, jewlery), and facial expressions. I do like haow you bring the discriptions into the story though! You have an intresting writing style that draws you in, but the plot is fast and short, Spread it a bit thinner. I really do like this though and plan to keep reding. Daimon's language is intresting to and poses some questions. *eyes go sparkly* I really like your hair and eye color contrast, like wiyh Manx. She sounds really sexy! (Yea, why was she half naked, not that I'm complaing mind you) Oh and Daimon's incounter with Manx on the bed, how you described it was really good (like how he was going emotionly)! I wonder about thier relationship too... *&^$# this is so long! Sorry!

Hey, I like this! Um, what animal are they supposed to resemble exactly though. The discriptions are a bit jagged and the plot goes kinda fast, so I would edit this peice, but it's a good story line. Yaoi rocks! So far it seems to be just a shonen ai though? Will there be a lemon? Weird thing is, I was just reading Di Gi Charat, so now I'm seeinf Rik as Daimon and Coo as Minx (and enjoying it by the way). It also gave me some ideas for a peice I thought up ten minutes ago, so thanks! Please email me (AyatoGomay@hotmail.com) I want to talk to you one one one about this!

This is Tenshi-Usa, also known as Thanks for Nothing. ^^ I like this quite a bit. When will you update? this is really good! ^^ more pwease? Pwetty pwease?

This is pretty unusual... I can't picture exactly what this race is. I started thinking dragons or something when you said "tales."

Pretty interesting concept, but still... Yaoi I can handle...animals, no. What are these things? Maybe I missed something...

It's very well-written, though, and I like your style. I'll read some of your other things when I have time.