Wow, that was amazing!! Everybody knows that I just LOVE rhyming poems, and it's kind cool that the pattern changes closer to the bottom. Lovely imagery, ^^, write on!!

Wow
Beautiful write!!
This poem took my breath away...
just wow!!
please keep writing!
~Emmy

P.S~Why do they ALWAYS seem to blame everything on the period?
I mean from 5-7 days its like we ALL turn into space alien's...** me off...Laterz

I can relate. I love this poem. I can really get a sence of your personal style or writing. Good job. Keep it up.