 saturn696 2003-09-30 . chapter 1definitely a different idea...but it actually kind of made sense...u told me not to think too hard about it or i might turn into u lol...i must ask what made u come up w/this? |
 Asian Rob 2003-09-14 . chapter 1 Nice work, Luis. It could definately be better, but it made me laugh. Keep it up. I love you. |
 mysticsage 2003-09-14 . chapter 1This actually made alot of sense, and since noone really knows whether or not religion is true.. it really doesnt matter if this was a crazy idea, it actually could exist. I like it.. |
 sarah122345678 2003-09-13 . chapter 1hey- this was good. very different... and you ask me where i come up with my work?? jk.. anyway, you are a great writer and i'm gonna go read your other story now... |
 habeeb 2003-09-13 . chapter 1 yeah. that was cool. u r way too creative, that much creativeness is not natural. but i know that i sure as hell aint natural, so there u go. |