i love this story its so orginal!please update !
conveniently located but oddly out of place dining table

This looks really interesting! The time difference twist was really interesting, along with them losing their memories. However, it would be nice to see what happens next . . . Are you going to ever update this? Because this is really good, and I'd love to see it continued!

FreeDaChickens

this is a really interesting story... you need to update it! i really want to know if the guys ever get their memories back (and Jamie and Tan get together) and if they ever overthrow the goblins.

: )

DH

Hi Chainlinks,

I really liked the premise of the story, the alternate world that you built is really interesting. And the characters are engaging too, I'm rooting for James and Taniel. However, I'm left with a fustrated feeling by the development of the relationship. Like stuff just keeps happening and we are getting no where fast. Taniel seems to like James on a deep level, but he also seems to really be happy and at ease with Montreal too. Sort of like a switch going on and off. and not sure what James is thinking and why he was a jerk to Taniel in the first place. also, the supporting characters are cool but we never get to know them much.
But all in all, it was an interesting read.

Very good story so far, highly original from what I've read also. I hafta' say...LOVE the characters in this story, they're all so different and frikken' amazing to say the 'least!

...and now, I have to sleep, it's almost 12:00 AM and I have school tomorrow...=/

Your Friendly Neighbourhood Dead Bisexual

Look, it's a dead body...!

It's a girl...

Let's poke her boobs!

Morbid, am I not?

AUgh! You just left it there! Quick! Grab a pen or something and write! ...*sighs* Okay, nevermind. That was rather rude of me. Anyways, I really like this (obviously) and can't wait for the next update, but...take your time. Just get it done eventually, please?

Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao.

Wow that was weird. I liked the beginning but it's kinda turned around a lot... I'm not saying I don't like it, because I think I do. It's just very confusing. Maybe it would make more sense if hsiri explained everything and they went back or something.

...it's not ever yet, right? right? i've stumbled on this story a few times on other people's fav lists and finally decided to give it a go. glad i did, cause i like it =) and want to read more of it! so please update soon! =)

Ooh, i missed this update ^^;;Very nice. i can't wait to see what happens next!

I thought you'd never update! E! *glomps* I wuv you.

Ah, lunch was no problem, but I had a hard time convincing myself to stop reading to go make it. I liked this a lot! Very interesting.

Haha this is excellent so far, of course. I wonder if it'd be safe to eat lunch while reading the rest of it. :P

haha, James. This is really amusing in some parts, but it seems unrealistic to have such an organized arguement. Things only turn out like that on childrens shows trying to teach impressionable five year olds about listening to each other and not fighting. Not all of it was like that, it just surprised me when everyone started listening to each other. My favorite part is the first few chapters, I thought those were the best. ^^

lol! I like your characters

lol, this is hilarious, good job.