Loved this piece is very good written and has a special sarcasm that makes it perfect. Very good. Keep up

Creepy. I found it really ironic and disturbing that you referred to her as "lady" and yet the murderers as just "boys." Very chilling to read, but strikingly true.

Amazing, great detail. As I read over it again I can see the relations between each statement and realize that it fits beautifuly with what your trying to say. Good message, keep up the good work.

Very original, kind of disturbing, but very good none the less.