...this was great. i think it would be a poem great for rhetoric, i can see the emotion in it. nice job

I love this poem. you are a very emotional writer and I love your personal style. This si a topic I can relate to and mabe that is why i like it so much. Great job.

I cannot say how much I like this poem with my own words. Your words have touched me in way that it is hard to respond. The feeling in this poem are familar to me.

-Seras